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Capital is dead labor (lemmy.ml)
submitted 11 months ago* (last edited 11 months ago) by [email protected] to c/[email protected]
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[–] [email protected] 4 points 11 months ago (2 children)

The people "struggling" to read this need to go back to children's books. This is entirely readable.

[–] [email protected] 10 points 11 months ago* (last edited 11 months ago) (1 children)

There are too many commas and the phrasing is awkward. The first and last two commas are grammatically incorrect.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 11 months ago (1 children)

Removing those commas only makes it the more awkward. Don't apply for editing jobs.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 11 months ago (1 children)

Grammar isn't a matter of opinion, and incorrect grammar doesn't make anything less awkward. We're not talking about Oxford commas, these are just wrong.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 11 months ago

Not discussing opinions, keep up.

[–] [email protected] 8 points 11 months ago

no it's a mess