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2024 has seen two mass layoffs at Microsoft, with 1900 staff laid off in January, before a further 650 Xbox employees were shown the door in September.

Regardless, Microsoft's shares are up and the company's market value is now higher than $3tn, as it works to capitalise on the rise of AI.

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[โ€“] [email protected] 12 points 3 days ago (1 children)

This is much better but your previous comment was awful. It read like a LLM alone wrote it.

That being said I can't tell you why specifically it reads like that. I'm forwarding it to my friend who is a English professor to find out. If English is your second language then just keep at it and please don't take the criticism here personally.

[โ€“] [email protected] -4 points 3 days ago

Inconsistency of style most likely.